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evaluation
Question 1 - In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
We have now produced a second cut of our trailer. We have edited in the re-shooted version of the final scene. We now think that this almost mirrors the opening sequence which was an effect we were going for. My favourite moments are the close up of the feet and the close up of the chain being unlocked - I think these are both quite effective.
We also made minor changes to the transition between the 'Scotland Yard' scene and the 'Hello' moment. I feel that this is a lot smoother now - we moved 'the clock' so it now occurs after the 'Hello' - this is so the 'Hello' almost kicks of the ticking sequence and there isn't and moment where there is text and quiet music (which there was before).
The trailer is now coming very close to be finished and the final version will probably be this or very similar if we decide to make some more minor tweaks.
We have created a survey to get feedback on our trailer and ancillary products. It would be great if you were to fill it in!
Here is the link: https://www.surveymonkey.co.uk/r/XSWN685
The questions we asked were....
Here is the link: https://www.surveymonkey.co.uk/r/XSWN685
The questions we asked were....
1. What genre would you say that our trailer fits into?
2. Which part would you say was... a) Most Effective b) Least Effective
3. Did you get a sense of the plot from the trailer?
4. Do you think that this could be a trailer for an actual film? - Would you pay to see this film?
5. Do you think that the use of a popular song at the end of the trailer was effective? Do you think the use of music helped to convey the genre?
6. We have used techniques such as green screen in our trailer. Do you think that even with these techniques the trailer maintains its authenticity?
7. When making our trailer we decided to try and incorporate a film noir style into it. Do you think this style comes through in the final trailer?
8. Do you think that the length of the trailer is appropriate?
9. Overall, what age rating do you think that our trailer fits into?
10. Do you think that the ancillary products (poster and magazine) follow the same style as the trailer and do you think they work well to promote the film?
Most of the questions were in relation to our trailer and one of the questions brings in the magazine and poster. This survey will help us with our evaluation and with any other final tweaks we may want to make.
Here are the 4th drafts of my poster and magazine:
I received the following feedback about my third drafts:
Cover –
- Empire tagline is too hidden.
- White line on masked man.
- Five different shades of grey – one is weirdly outlined.
- Spacing between text and lines isn’t consistent.
- Size of lines isn’t consistent.
- 2110 – newspaper cuttings?
- white outlines around some images.
- Mask is a bit weird – sizing issue?
- Weird lump in severed head.
- The bloody knife is a bit clipart.
- Tagline font doesn’t fit.
- 2110? Cut outs?
- Weird line coming out the masked man
The Changes I Made
For the front cover, I decreased the size of the Empire tagline so that it could be seen much more clearly. I may decide to increase the size of the tagline again slightly - I will print off my front cover and see if it is a readable size when printed. I also reduced the white lines around the killer which makes the editing look a little more professional. I have also made sure that across the magazine cover, there are only 3 different shades of grey rather than 5. This makes it look a lot more professional and creates more of a style. The reason I had so many shades of grey beforehand was that due to the lighting changes of the background, darker and lighter colours couldn't be seen in certain areas. To fix this, I increased the opacity of all of the text to 100% and picked colours that could still be seen quite clearly. I also made sure that all of the text was the same and that none had any strange outlines. In my opinion, the biggest issue with my third draft was the spacing between the lines and fonts. To combat this issue, I pressed the down arrow 6 times from the bottom of the font which moved the line - I did this same procedure for all the text and lines to make sure that the gaps were the same size. To fix the length of the lines, I decided to have them all touch the edge of the front cover and then end as soon as they touch the killer. We previously changed our logo due to the newspaper cuttings blurring, however, we found a way to have the newspaper cuttings without them blurring as much by reducing their size. The newspaper cuttings fit well into the film and create something the audience can identify about the branding.
For the poster, I zoomed in and removed any of the weird, white outlines and other lines to make the editing look a lot more professional. Whilst zooming in, I also found issues with the placing of the mask so I fixed that so this will no longer be an issue. I fixed the lump in the head by moving the current black box I had and re-doing one so it didn't affect the vignette effect of the clock. In my opinion, my biggest issue was the bloody knife - looking back, it did look quite cartoony and clip-art. However, to try and reduce this, I have gone with a 'less is more' effect with the blood - I have also have decided to have the blood dripping as that is more realistic and fits in more with my trailer. I am still playing around with the colour of the blood - at the moment it could be a little bit too bright and some blood could be removed but I will get further feedback to find out whether I need to make further improvements on this. I also changed the font of the tagline - originally, I thought my previous font was quite good as it connoted horror. However, it didn't really fit in with the rest of the poster and wasn't very bold. I decided to change it to the font 'Muro' which is bolder and fits in quite well with the poster. I also changed the colour of the tagline from white to light grey which matches the colour scheme of the poster. Like with my magazine, I changed the logo so it once again included newspaper cut outs. We have also decided to make our logo even redder so this had a knock on effect on both of my ancillary products as everything needed to be changed from the original darker red to the brighter one. On my poster, I have also started to include logos at the bottom as I have found that these are common on film posters. I will continue to add logos so that the whole bottom line is filled. I also softened out some of the images so they weren't as pointy and looked a little smoother and more professional.
Here are my fourth drafts:
Over the past few weeks, I have been creating my ancillary products. I have created a poster and magazine front cover for End: 2110. I have produced numerous drafts and have made tweaks along the way. My first drafts used mainly stand in images as I hadn't had the time to take my own photos just yet. The feedback I got from my first drafts was mainly based on spacing and colour changes. As you can see, between draft 1 and 2 of my poster, I changed the colours of the 'stars names' to red and white instead of just white - this helped create more of a colour scheme and brand. I also changed the colour of the credit block and the size of the tagline. Between draft 1 and 2 of my magazine, I changed the size of 'Plus exclusive' as it was originally too large. I also changed the type of font that the plaques contained at the bottom. I also fixed the spacing for the skyline and made sure that the barcode matched the length of the E. I also added the tagline 'The World's Biggest Movie Magazine' as that was a key convention I was missing. Once I had made these changes, the only feedback I got from draft 2 of both my poster and magazine was that I needed to add my own photos. I was happy with the photo used on my magazine so I decided not to change that. Also, in general for my magazine, I researched and downloaded a font that Empire typically use in order to stick to codes and conventions of the magazine.
The changes between drafts 2 and 3 were a lot more drastic. For my poster, I actually got some images and played on the silhouette themes in the trailer - I thought this would tie in the trailer quite nicely as I referred to key, memorable moments (knife, argument, injured wound). I also created a similar effect to The Town That Dreaded Sundown effect which I was going for. I darkened the image and created a vignette effect for the clock so it looked almost like a shadow/spotlight. Another change I made was the logo - the 2110 kept blurring whenever it was enlarged so to combat this issue we found a font that still had a similar effect. I also put a filter over the face of the mask, like in the trailer, which also creates a similar style - I believe the poster resembles the style of the trailer quite well. For my magazine, I decided to no longer make it an End:2110 special and make it a Thriller special. Empire don't really do big features on just one horror film but they do often focus on genres. A Thriller was a genre Empire haven't done a special on yet so even though that breaks convention, it could easily be a special they do in the future. I used the July 2015 'Ant-Man' cover as inspiration by mentioning many films in the genre around my main image. I also changed the logo once again to suit the poster of the film and to fix it from blurring when enlarged. This all led to be removing the images I was going to have of cast members holding plaques. I am pleased about this as this isn't a common thing that Empire magazine do. Another change that I made was that I took my own background image - even though it can't really be seen due to the text covering it, it is quite a realistic location which is the type of location that is used in our trailer. In Draft 3 of my magazine, I also softened the top of my main image as the hoody area was quite pointy - I also darkened the image a little. I chose not to filter the mask red on the magazine front cover as it didn't fit the style of the cover and I wasn't making any other references to the trailer so it may have looked a little artificial. It could also emphasise that the red is filtered on the poster for effect.
Draft 3 for both my magazine and poster will be very similar to what my final edits will look like. I will probably slightly tweak each of them after further feedback but I believe my final versions will look quite similar.
Here are bigger versions of my current 'first cut' drafts:
We have now finished filming - over the past few weeks, we have filmed the fast sequence for our trailer and re-shot the end sequence. Whilst editing, we knew the fast sequence was the part that was going to bring the whole trailer together so it is good we now have it shot and edited in. We also wanted to re-shoot the end sequence so that it almost mirrored the opening sequence and stuck with the style of the trailer. We are yet to edit in the revised end sequence but it should be a little longer and have a similar effect to the opening sequence.
When planning to film the fast sequence, we thought that it would take a lot longer than it did to complete. However, we ended up getting quite a lot of good footage and coming up with some extra ideas that were effective. We also made the most of where we were and were able to get shots that we hadn't planned to get that day. The first scene we shot was of the bloody hands - we changed the lighting numerous times so we could decide what looked most effective in the editing sequence - we had full lights, dim lights and a torch. We found that full lights made the blood look a little too red and it didn't look very authentic so we decided not to include any of that footage. However, there was some footage we got where the camera was focused well. From previous filming days, we learnt that it is good to check the footage before we get into school. We transferred our footage onto our laptops to check that it looked good so we knew that it would be good enough to be included in the trailer. We also shot the argument scene as the location we were using had a good clear, pale wall that was just what we wanted. We had to move the lighting and angle of the camera around in order to get the effect we wanted. Whilst filming this, we also came up with shooting a shot of a silhouette of a weapon - we decided on a knife as it would be the easiest to recreate and also fitted well with our trailer as it is the type of weapon the killer would use. We made the knife by cutting out some cardboard and then covered it with tinfoil - it didn't matter how authentic the actual knife looked but that the silhouette looked realistic. We then dipped the 'knife' in fake blood to create a dripping effect.
We also came up with our 'production logo' which resulted in us changing our studio name from Clockwork Films to Spectral films. We filmed the logo using the light reflection of a lid of a patterned candle - this wasn't intentional but it gave a really good effect that we liked. From this shooting day, we learnt a lot about shooting silhouettes and how to get the best effects when doing so - we learnt a lot about getting the right lighting and angles.
We were filming with friends who needed outside shots so we all went on a walk. Whilst doing so, we made the most of the opportunity to get some exterior shots for our trailer. We ended up shooting a shot of a male character turning around and we got some exterior, landscape shots of the church and countryside to create a sense of atmosphere. However, when it came to editing, we couldn't really find a place for this exterior shots so we decided not to include them.
On this day, we also re-shot the flashing killer moments. The original footage we had didn't look very professional as there was a curtain in the background so we made the most of the plain walls. We now have the effect we wanted and think it looks good in our trailer. The only issue we had was creating the flashing/strobe effect - it was hard to control the flicker of the torch as at first, it was showing different amounts of light depending on how hard we pressed. However, after practice, we knew how hard to press and it worked quite well.
We recently re-shot the end sequence of our trailer which we now think mirrors the opening sequence - there are the same amounts of shots and there are similar shot types (e.g. feet walking, knocking on door etc). This sticks with the style of the trailer and works quite well. We wanted to extend this part of the trailer as we felt it originally came to an end quite quickly and not very effectively. After filming this, we have now concluded our filming for the trailer - unless we find any little bits we would like to re-shoot, we are happy with the footage we have and just have to edit this last sequence into the trailer.
Here is the first draft of our trailer before the revised ending sequence has been edited in:
When planning to film the fast sequence, we thought that it would take a lot longer than it did to complete. However, we ended up getting quite a lot of good footage and coming up with some extra ideas that were effective. We also made the most of where we were and were able to get shots that we hadn't planned to get that day. The first scene we shot was of the bloody hands - we changed the lighting numerous times so we could decide what looked most effective in the editing sequence - we had full lights, dim lights and a torch. We found that full lights made the blood look a little too red and it didn't look very authentic so we decided not to include any of that footage. However, there was some footage we got where the camera was focused well. From previous filming days, we learnt that it is good to check the footage before we get into school. We transferred our footage onto our laptops to check that it looked good so we knew that it would be good enough to be included in the trailer. We also shot the argument scene as the location we were using had a good clear, pale wall that was just what we wanted. We had to move the lighting and angle of the camera around in order to get the effect we wanted. Whilst filming this, we also came up with shooting a shot of a silhouette of a weapon - we decided on a knife as it would be the easiest to recreate and also fitted well with our trailer as it is the type of weapon the killer would use. We made the knife by cutting out some cardboard and then covered it with tinfoil - it didn't matter how authentic the actual knife looked but that the silhouette looked realistic. We then dipped the 'knife' in fake blood to create a dripping effect.
We also came up with our 'production logo' which resulted in us changing our studio name from Clockwork Films to Spectral films. We filmed the logo using the light reflection of a lid of a patterned candle - this wasn't intentional but it gave a really good effect that we liked. From this shooting day, we learnt a lot about shooting silhouettes and how to get the best effects when doing so - we learnt a lot about getting the right lighting and angles.
We were filming with friends who needed outside shots so we all went on a walk. Whilst doing so, we made the most of the opportunity to get some exterior shots for our trailer. We ended up shooting a shot of a male character turning around and we got some exterior, landscape shots of the church and countryside to create a sense of atmosphere. However, when it came to editing, we couldn't really find a place for this exterior shots so we decided not to include them.
On this day, we also re-shot the flashing killer moments. The original footage we had didn't look very professional as there was a curtain in the background so we made the most of the plain walls. We now have the effect we wanted and think it looks good in our trailer. The only issue we had was creating the flashing/strobe effect - it was hard to control the flicker of the torch as at first, it was showing different amounts of light depending on how hard we pressed. However, after practice, we knew how hard to press and it worked quite well.
We recently re-shot the end sequence of our trailer which we now think mirrors the opening sequence - there are the same amounts of shots and there are similar shot types (e.g. feet walking, knocking on door etc). This sticks with the style of the trailer and works quite well. We wanted to extend this part of the trailer as we felt it originally came to an end quite quickly and not very effectively. After filming this, we have now concluded our filming for the trailer - unless we find any little bits we would like to re-shoot, we are happy with the footage we have and just have to edit this last sequence into the trailer.
Here is the first draft of our trailer before the revised ending sequence has been edited in:
One audience theory is the effects model. This is the idea that audiences are passive and that the power lies with the message of the text. The hypodermic needle model relates to the effect model. This is because it suggests that audiences are 'injected' with lots of information and just passively take it in, unable to resist. This model is supported by Bandura's Bobo Doll experiment that found that children who watched violent behaviour were likely to replicate that behaviour. Real life examples also support this - for example, the murder of James Bulger by children who had watch Child Play 3. A Clockwork Orange has also been associated with rape and other violent attacks. The simple idea of the effects model is that people see images and are likely to be influenced by them. This relates to my trailer and ancillary products. In the trailer, a silhouette of a knife is shown and a graphic image of an open wound is also shown. In my poster, a silhouette of a knife is also used. Based on the effects model, these could influence the consumer and lead to them carrying out violent activities. The trailer would be easier to restrain younger audiences from as it would be a 'Red Band' trailer. These are only shown before films that are age appropriate and Youtube only lets users over 18 access Red Band trailers. The poster however would be harder to restrict. The poster would not be able to be shown on the sides of buses or on billboards - an edited version with the removal of the knife may be able to be displayed in public places. However, the poster would probably be able to be shown inside cinemas. The whole theme of our trailer may be quite threatening as it is all about murder - the way the trailer is restricted will make sure that passive younger consumers do not replicate any of the behaviour. However, once the film has been released, it would be up to the parents or the individuals themselves for whether they see the trailer or film. The effects model also suggests that people can be sent into a moral panic - this could lead to films being banned. When creating our trailer, we can to make sure we weren't pushing the boundaries (violence-wise) too much or else the trailer wouldn't actually be allowed to air.
Uses and Gratifications
Another audience theory is the uses and gratifications theory. This is almost the opposite of the effects model as it suggests that the audience is quite active. The theory suggests that the audience uses the text for gratification or pleasure. The theory also suggests that the power lies with the audience and they are in control - they can choose to reject or accept the media. This can be explained through films that are not financially successful - in 2015, a remake of Fantastic Four was released which received negative reviews and bad word of mouth. Before the film was released, lots of negative things were said about it and a very negative buzz was created. This led to the film underperforming during the opening weekend and seeing a very high second week drop which shows that audiences rejected the film due to it not satisfying their needs. We hope that our trailer is quite effective and that lots of anticipation will be created - the magazine feature is all about the theories based on who the killer is. This means that people will be talking about the film and hopefully, a buzz will be created which would lead to the audience accepting the film and paying to see it. Audiences can use media for diversion, escapism, pleasure, comparing relationships and lifestyles with their own and sexual stimulation. I would say that our trailer and film would be used for diversion and escapism. Audiences would also be satisfied by our trailer as they would be able to relate to the characters and their lifestyles - our audience would be a teen audience and our characters are of a similar age - the audience would relate to the school lifestyles and the types of dramas that occur at school. However, our plot is quite extreme so audiences would be able to compare themselves and may feel thankful that their drama isn't as bad. The film is set in quite a realistic, modern environment which makes it even more relatable and creates a diversion for the audience. The whole plot creates a sense of escapism as the audience can escape from their day-to-day lives and go into a world that is probably a lot less worse than theirs. The uses and gratifications theory also suggests that violent images can be helpful and can help audiences understand that being violent is bad.
Reception Theory
This theory was created by Stuart Hall and is another audience theory. The main idea of the theory is that the audience decodes the messages that have been encoded into the text by producers. However, audiences can't always decode the correct meaning which could lead to the text being rejected as audiences fail to understand it. The 3 main ways that texts can be decoded are dominant/preferred, negotiated or oppositional. Dominant is when the correct movie is decoded, negotiated is when the audience accepts, refines and rejects certain elements and oppositional is when the text is misread and therefore rejected. In our trailer, we have included an image of an open wound - the intended message is that the character has been murdered. However, this message could be misinterpreted or rejected by audiences.
For my poster, I am using the existing poster for the 2014 film 'The Town That Dreaded Sundown' as inspiration. I am using this as inspiration as both that film and our film have similar 'mystery killer' storylines. In my poster and other ancillary products, I wanted to play up the element of the mystery killer as that is probably the 'scariest' thing about our film so is likely a selling factor - the audience sees a violent looking figure and will assume the film is a horror/thriller so will go and see it to feel scared. For my poster, I will be having a similar main image to the one that The Town That Dreaded Sundown uses - I like the way there is an imprint of the silhouette/basic image of the mask the killer is wearing as the backdrop. I also like the layout of this poster - I think is it quite clear. However, I will be adding in a tagline and the names of the talent involved. I think the tagline 'You Can't Escape the Countdown' helps to emphasise the plot of the film and gives further clues that this is a horror film. For the release date and title, I have continued to play on the idea of the newspaper clipping letters which is used in the note in the film - this creates iconography.
Once I have taken and edited by own image, I will make sure that the spacings are all correct - at the moment the names of the talent are not all equally spread across the page due to the stand in image being positioned at a strange angle.
Over the past few months, we have been busy filming our trailer. Our filming hasn't always been a smooth process - there have been many hurdles that we have had to overcome. However, this process has definitely helped us to develop the skills to overcome hurdles and any issues.
One issue we have is being able to get locations and our cast members all at the same time - the drama studio in our school is used by all students so it is difficult to find a time when it is free. We have also found that when it is free, our cast members are not available (due to other commitments). We have also had issues with the equipment within the drama studio - there were no lights that we could use. However, we overcame this issue by using what we had access to which was a light that flashed - we created a strobe effect that could become useful and effective in our actual trailer.
Filming for this project as definitely helped to improve our skills with using cameras. Before this course, I hadn't really used a camera before. This means that we have had some issues with using a camera whilst filming. Our biggest issue has been getting the camera to focus. However, we overcome this issue with patience and using our hands as a point for the camera to focus on. We have also found out which settings work best for focusing. For the previous footage which was not in focus, we have re-shooted so that the shots are clearer and of a good quality.
Over the Christmas holidays, we re-shot the opening sequence for our trailer as the original had issues with framing, focusing, shakiness and lighting. With the re-shoot, we have decided to go for more of an artistic effect for the opening sequence which will help our trailer and film to stand out against other horror films. We received feedback in class that our trailer needs to be a little more 'horrific' so we have decided to make the gore elements more prominent. To do this, we asked our friend who has skills in special effects makeup to create a cut on April's throat for the scene. This creates an element of threat as the killer actually comes across as brutal, fearsome and scary.
One issue we have is being able to get locations and our cast members all at the same time - the drama studio in our school is used by all students so it is difficult to find a time when it is free. We have also found that when it is free, our cast members are not available (due to other commitments). We have also had issues with the equipment within the drama studio - there were no lights that we could use. However, we overcame this issue by using what we had access to which was a light that flashed - we created a strobe effect that could become useful and effective in our actual trailer.
Filming for this project as definitely helped to improve our skills with using cameras. Before this course, I hadn't really used a camera before. This means that we have had some issues with using a camera whilst filming. Our biggest issue has been getting the camera to focus. However, we overcome this issue with patience and using our hands as a point for the camera to focus on. We have also found out which settings work best for focusing. For the previous footage which was not in focus, we have re-shooted so that the shots are clearer and of a good quality.
Over the Christmas holidays, we re-shot the opening sequence for our trailer as the original had issues with framing, focusing, shakiness and lighting. With the re-shoot, we have decided to go for more of an artistic effect for the opening sequence which will help our trailer and film to stand out against other horror films. We received feedback in class that our trailer needs to be a little more 'horrific' so we have decided to make the gore elements more prominent. To do this, we asked our friend who has skills in special effects makeup to create a cut on April's throat for the scene. This creates an element of threat as the killer actually comes across as brutal, fearsome and scary.